Tuesday 16 September 2008

Teacher Feedback

Your blog is looking really dense, well done. In terms of improvement some images would help to effectively communicate the mise en scene you are hoping to create. See if you can find some images of your other characters to illustrate roughly what you want them to look like.
In terms of feedback on your pitch you did a good job at communicating your idea to the group and your powerpoint was an effective way of doing this. Your idea is concrete and fits with the genre and lyrics of the song.
My only advice at this stage would be to consider a variety of shot types and angles to give the video variety and also to maintain the viewers interest.
Keep up the good work.

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