Rough Cut Feedback

Feedback of the Rough Cut

Camerawork:

• had some great shots
• when you half walk out of the door then edited well to flow
• locker shot cleverly done
• great use of panning with locker scene

Editing:

• good but transitions need some work
• lip syncing also needs work

Effects:
no comments

Mise en scene:

• good use of scenarios
• good simply ideas for outfits
• good involvement of using the guitars
• good locations and using props
• like the different locations

Performance/Genre:

• performances were believable

Continuity:

• the picnic scene had parts where it appeared that the bottle was teleporting

Overall Comments:

• rough cut is very good and can see what you guys are trying to acheive
• will look a lot better once finished